新加坡国立大学硕士课程时间安排
2024-11-15
更新时间:2024-10-09 06:59:38作者:嘉佳老师
对于雅思写作来说,学会雅思写作的技巧是非常重要的,接下来就和出国留学网来看看2019雅思考试作文书写精简指南。
雅思写作精简建议一:避免空洞的单词和词组
1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关或重要的信息,完全可以删掉。
比如:When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.
这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换。
例如:Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.
雅思写作精简建议二:避免重复
1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。
例如下面这个例子:The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改为:
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更简洁的表达方式为:
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换。
例如:My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.
这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly,显得更为简洁:
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.
雅思写作精简建议三:选择最恰当的语法结构
选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要,但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则:
1.一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中最重要的意思。
例如:The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.
从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可以改为下面这句话:
My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.
2.避免频繁使用“there be”结构。
例如下面的句子:There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.
可以改为:
My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.
更简洁的句式为:
My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.
3.把从句改为短语或单词。
例如:Dairy cows were raised on the farm,which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an areathat was remote.
简介的表达方式为:
The dairy farm was located in a remotearea, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.
4.仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候,才使用被动语态。
例如:In the fall, not only did the cows haveto be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather'sfamily.
本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-mygrandfather's family”,而使用了被动语态後,彷佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态,相对来说更简洁一些:
In the fall, my grandfather's family notonly milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.
5.用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语。
例如:My grandfather didn't have time tostand around doing nothing with his school friends.
Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达,即loiter:
My grandfather didn't have time toloiter with his school friends.
6.有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达。
例如:Profits from the farm were not times they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They werenot sufficient to pay for a university degree.
两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子:
Profits from the farm were sometimes toosmall to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree.
用户评论
终于出来了!早知道我就把这些题目攒着好好练习了!感觉这个考试越来越难预测了,不过仔细看看评分标准,还是得注重逻辑清晰、论点有力啊。
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这真是个福音啊!之前一直想找可靠的雅思作文素材来源,现在终于解决了!
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题目看着还挺新鲜的,而且评分标准也很详细,看来是要花些时间好好温习了。
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我一直觉得雅思考试作文太主观了,看看这评分标准,感觉还是很难消除这种不确定性。希望考官严格执行吧!
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这篇总结写的真贴心啊!把最关键的部分都整理出来了,对于备考的同学来说真是太方便了。多做练习题的话,感觉雅思作文的分数应该还能争取一下。
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这篇文章给我一种“有知识”的感觉,评分标准里提到的词汇和写作技巧都很专业,看来还是得花时间来学习啊...
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看了这些题目和评分标准,我开始有点慌了,我的写作水平真的没有达到要求?还是要好好调整目标目标吧......
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评分标准里面提到论点清晰很重要,可我一直不知道怎么才能做到这一点...希望会有具体的指导方法介绍啊!
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这些题目确实很有实用价值,而且和考试的真实难度也比较接近,可以作为真题练习很好的参考。但是还是要关注最新的考试趋势和变化啊。
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这篇文章写的太好了!简单易懂,关键部分也突出重点,非常适合想要提升雅思作文成绩的人们来阅读学习!
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我最近就在准备雅思考试,看了这篇总结,感觉对自己更加自信了!知道考试的重点和方向在哪里,再结合大量的练习,相信スコア目标可以达到!
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希望文章里的题目能够反映真实的考试难度,要是太难的话,考场上会有点慌乱怎么办?
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雅思考试作文真是太费劲了,看这评分标准越发感觉自己水平不足啊...看来我得多学习一些写作技巧了!
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看到这么多题目和评分标准,突然觉得备考好像更有方向感了!加油!相信自己可以做得到!
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评分标准里面提到要关注逻辑性和结构性,这一点我一直都有点苦手,希望有具体的技巧分享给我学习!
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这些题目真是太难了!感觉我的词汇量还远远不够。看来我要加倍努力地背单词和积累素材才行!
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这篇文章非常实用,给了我很多启发!让我更加明确了雅思考试作文的写作方向和学习策略!
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希望以后这些题目和评分标准能够更具体一些,例如可以提供更多范文和其他参考素材。这样对备考同学们更有帮助!
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