德国留学攻略:了解你必须满足的条件
2024-11-15
更新时间:2024-01-20 21:58:26作者:嘉佳老师
去法国读艺术专业的学生,除了要准备作品集,还需要进行自己的陈述准备。接下来和出国留学网看看法国艺术留学需不需要准备个人陈述?
PS介绍
个人陈述(Personal Statement)简称PS,一般来说,各个学校对PS 的字数要求和内容要求都是不同的,但是又有一致的一些观点。个人陈述不同于个人简历,它更多的是用来突出申请者在该专业方面的优势,以及他们自身的优势。所以,个性是个人陈述最重要的原则。
写作内容
1. 申请人对该专业的认识与理解,表达申请人的专业发展职业规划
写自己对所申请专业领域的了解,对该专业的见解,对自己在该专业的发展目标,职业规划等,表妹自己对该专业的热爱以及学习的热情。
在写到专业认识的时候切记抄袭他人的说法,可以有借鉴,但是还是要有自己的理解。对自己专业方向上的发展与目标是不要写得要宽泛,也不要太小,适当的,切合实际的目标最好。
2. 申请人背景或者是经历,表现出自己适合该学校
申请人背景和经历方面不要写简历里面重复的内容,个人陈述最忌讳的就是表达的大学跟个人简历里的内容没有区别,因为个人陈述是跟个人简历相辅相成的,却不是重复冗杂的。
这里的经历要对所申请学校的要求有一定关联。但是不要在中国里面大肆宣扬自己从小到大获得的各种成就,可以举例说明自己在某些方面的成绩来表现自己在所申请专业方面的优秀或者闪光点。
3. 对该学校的了解,表达学校是适合自己的
写对学校的了解的同时要注意学校对申请者的要求,你要在这里突出自己所达到的那些要求,而不是突出自己的不足,当然不是要你隐瞒自己做不到的要求,要学会扬长避短。
在这里要对学校的一些吸引你的地方进行阐述,但是不要人云亦云,不要比如学会什么你也喜欢什么,要更多的表达你对所申请教授的项目的了解与向往等等。
写作原则
1. 个性原则
一千个人看哈利波特就有一千个哈利波特,每个人的个人陈述代表的都是他自己,所以个人陈述是写自己,你跟别人的不同才这个个人陈述的重点。
2. 专业原则
不要离题,个人陈述要包括资金在给专业方面的一些见解,为什么想学这个专业,有些什么学这个专业的计划等等。
3. 优势原则
突出自己的优势,比赛获奖,参与什么国际的,代表国家的活动等等,表现自己在中国专业的强势能力。
4. 自信原则
个人陈述有要谦虚的地方,就是不要铺天盖地的将自己所获得的所以大大小小的奖项,但是整体来说,自信还是更重要的,大方的表现自己的优势,自己的能力等等。
5. 清晰原则
不论是你写的经历还所获得的奖项这些都必须清晰,有逻辑,不能是假的,要在许多有这种经历或奖项的人力表现出你的不同或者完整。
陈述样本
英文版:I thought much before I began to write the PS. However, holding the pen, I suddenly felt wordless because I have too much to say, too much to write. Standing on the crossroad of life, I determined to study abroad without any hesitations.
It was not the desire for the life overseas, but the pursuit of my professional study that aroused my idea to study abroad. I was longing for the further study and embedded understanding of the essence of Information Science, tasting its charm. Pocketing this interest, I came into the department of Beijing Forestry University. Through several years’ study there, I gradually realized that the modern information society needed not only the professional talents in information science, but also the embedded researches in this field in order to use it into every enterprise. Meanwhile, it is certain that the information science is just the developing trend in the future, which could historically change the ever familiar life style. Therefore, in the process of learning, I can taste its interest and challenge, with which I can keep abreast with the latest technology. Furthermore, I think it was valuable for me to contribute my youth into the Information Science, the most prospective enterprise in the future.
My ordinary score on my school report will tell you that I am not good at examinations. Those so-called “examination skills” are also strange to me. Instead, I emphasize the practical operations and the real needs of the society, expecting to learn the knowledge and technology that stands at the top of the period. Therefore, I got the latest knowledge mainly by reading large amount of English books and browsing the websites. Besides, I participated in many practical activities, in which I could use what I have learnt into practice.
In my sophomore year, just as other schoolmates were submerging themselves into the fairy world of PC games, I began my part time working experience by working as a technician on the website of a small company. Just at that exciting time, I found that it was very difficult to use the theories I learnt on class into the practical work. Trapped in the gap between the school and society, I collected and summarized much practical professional files from a series of websites and learnt the HTML language and the CSS design by myself. From the first attempt in the society, I realized that I got much from difficulties rather than smooth work. On designing the information part of the website, I could not find the perfect combination between the files. However, as a hard-nosed boy, I was not defeated by the difficulties, but very excited towards them. By classifying and summarizing the files I found on the websites, I finally solved the problem.
Taking advantage of my insistent efforts, I was finally kissed by an opportunity to participate in a developing project, in which I worked as a core assistant of my teacher to develop the Iptables module under Linux. From a theoretical point of view, the development of the module could be included in the basic theories of the operating system. However, it was another challenge for me because I was not familiar with the programming of system module. Finally, I found the related knowledge on a book named “Module Programming”. Thanks to my repeated attempts, times of failures, at last, presented me with the final success. Through this practice, I believe firmly that failure is the access to the success.
I had a dream when I was just a kid----becoming a member in Chinese Academy of Science, the pioneer of the science and technology in China. My senior year witnessed me to achieve my dream. Under the recommendation of my teacher, I got the opportunity to work with the professors in automation department of CAS on developing the interface based on the biometric authentication technology. Two weeks was a short time, but a harvest time for me. Through the exchange with the experts and professors and looking up large amount of books and related literatures in the library, my understanding on all the specifies BIOAPI interface, the design of the 类 and data structure and the biometric interfaces had largely deepened. Seeing the final success, the sweetest smile in the world blossomed on my face.
My assiduity in study and careful working attitude won the appreciation of the professors in CAS. Therefore, at the last period of my undergraduate study, I was recommended by them to complete my graduation design by participating in a graduate subject of Chinese Blog Search Engine.
As the assistant, I completed the access and storage of the Blog data by using C language and Perl database. With the help of my studying fellows, I finally designed a frame of the Blog Search Engine and learn many new technologies.
After graduation, I accepted the offer of working on Sina website, where I was mainly responsible for the batch installation of operating system, tailor of the software package, the safety configuration, the smooth running of the equipments on line, the test and recovery of various hardware failures. Meanwhile, I was in charge of the immediate response and disposal of the accidents and the exact maintenance of thousands of servers in the whole company.
As a system engineer in Sina website, there are a lot of things to do in the application process, operating system and network as well as in the hardware. We generally solve the problems by our own practical experience combining with the related professional literatures and the knowledge we have learnt.
Years of working experience made me realized clearly that it has still a long way to go to achieve my dream---becoming an expert in this field. I have to step out of the “flowers” coating me now for my achievements to the further study for the next station on the way of life. Therefore, I need a nutritious academic atmosphere.
It was my curiosity that pushed me onto the road of learning new technologies and it was my strong learning ability and capability that presented me with the current achievement. I believe that standing at the cross road of life after a few years further study, I will be more confident and stronger expectative for my future.
用户评论
真的,法国艺术院校申请可是绕了一圈才明白需要个人的陈述材料!还好我提前做了解,不然肯定措手不及啊,感觉现在很多学校都重视学生的个性表达能力。
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这篇文章真是太棒了!终于有一个清晰具体的解析!法国艺术留学对个人陈述的要求确实很高,以前看好多人说“不重要”结果没拿下来offer就后悔啦!我觉得还是要花时间好好准备的。
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我当初申请巴黎学院的时候也差点忘了准备好个人陈述材料,还好导师提醒了我!真的很有必要啊,毕竟要展现你的艺术理念和热情啊!
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法國藝術院校留学真不簡單啊,申請過程很多細節需要注意,個人陳述就是一個重點了!看來還是要多收集資料了解學校要求才能提升錄取率!
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我以为个人的陈述材料只是些额外的补充,没想到对法国艺术院校申请的影响这么大啊!原来好多学校都特别重视个人表达能力!太重要了!! 必须好好准备起来了!
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其实我觉得个人陈述材料最重要的不是华丽辞藻,而是要真誠地展现你的艺术理想和坚持。
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这篇博客写的太棒啦!我本来对法国艺术留学有点犹豫的,现在看完我的心意更坚定啦! 好好准备个陈述材料,明年去巴黎啊!
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我觉得申请过程中个人陈述确实是一件很麻烦的事情,但我还是要认真对待!毕竟这是让导师了解你的一个机会, 要体现自己的艺术追求和创新能力啊!
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说真的,法国艺术院校的竞争太大了!个人陈述材料是敲门砖之一!要花时间去打磨好这个材料,才能脱颖而出啊!
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准备个陈述材料可真不容易,要反复修改,还要得到导师意见,费时费神。希望我做的作品集和个人陈述能让法国艺术院校录取我吧!
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看了文章之后,我对法国艺术院校的申请有了更明确的目的了! 我一定要好好准备我的陈述材料,展现我的艺术热情和追求!
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这篇文章确实很有帮助,让我对法国艺术院校申请个人陈述材料有了更清晰的了解。 不过感觉这个环节还是比较有挑战性呀!希望自己能写到让招生老师眼前一亮的作品!
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我当初准备个人陈述的时候花了好多时间,可是结果录取通知书却没能拿到啊!真是太失望了!
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真的吗?我觉得个人陈述材料太主观了,会不会影响评判的公平性呢?
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我觉得法国艺术院校留学真的很考量个人特长和兴趣。准备个陈述材料也是让招生老师了解你的个性和理念最好的方式!
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我还在纠结要不要去法国留学呢,读完这篇文章后感觉法国艺术院校申请确实很认真! 不过我想试试看我的梦想吧!
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个人陈述的稿件如何才能更突出学生的个体差异呢?有没有什么技巧分享吗?
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这篇文章真是太赞了! 我已经开始着手准备我的个陈材料啦!希望能被法国艺术院校录取!
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